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01 January, 2000 - (SEASON ONE/S1) Roleplay
Training Centre The RTC is here to advise you on how to RP efficiently. Everybody writes and thinks differently as well as everyone has different opinions on a wide range of RPs. Hopefully though, the RTC will help you learn the bare essentials and help you develop your own style's and technique's to RPing. The remainder of this page will have several snippets of RPs taken exclusively from the official SAS managers and will be given in depth reviews and hints and tips on what could have made it worse or better. Let's start off on this journey. First of all, you want to know what you can do to make your RPs better right? Well take a look at your current RP(s) if you have any and select out what you think is your very best one and have a good look at it and think hard about what you could have done to make it better. Let's take a look now at one of SAS's managers, Tottenham Hotspurs Brian Thompson. The comments in [...green...] are official RTC comments and not part of the RP. THOMPSON'S PRESS CONFERENCE [...Don't forget your subject headings. They can play a vital role in your RP. They are there to give a first impression. Nothing fancy here but it gets the job done perfectly...] ***The North London Press Centre is packed with reporters and people from the football world curious to hear what Brian Thompson's views are on the recent and controversial events at Tottenham. He finally walks in amidst a barrage of cameras flashing. With him is THSA leader Kevin Sherman and Tony Inglewood, the senior press secretary and spin doctor at Spurs. The men take their seats and the press begin to calm themselves.*** [...Notice
how the RP has a beginning indicating between a series of '***' This gives
the RP a feel and atmosphere to it, and describes the location in detail,
whose at the location and why. A very simple but effective part of any RP
which many managers tend to leave out... Also notice how all the main
characters within this RP are mentioned in the opening sequence...] 1st Reporter: Gentlemen,
where do you stand on the proposed merger plans? [...Here
you can visualize how Thompson and Sherman are speaking to each other. You
can see Thompson looking at Sherman and asking him if he should speak and
this is indicated by the brackets used '( )'...] [...This
is another good line from Thompson... where he says 'Well gentleman, and
ladies,' Notice that it is purposely done like that as the proper saying
would be ladies and gentlemen. However it adds in the fact that football's
very much a man's game but let's not forget the ladies. You can almost
hear him saying those lines and then pausing to add in the ladies section
after...] [...In
this section we see the '***' again and this indicates that something is
happening which is common sense to all. It's almost again as if you are
their seeing with your own eyes that there are tonnes of cameras flashing
and there is a shock amongst the packed press conference...] [...Here
we see the '***' again and this time it's explaining something that has
happened which shocked everyone in the conference. This is another
original idea from Thompson and adds flair and flavour to his RPs. What
was at first an ordinary press conference has suddenly turned into
something far more intriguing and exciting...] [...Finally the ending which is also quite superb... the final three words leave you excited and eager to know what happens in the next installment. It's important to remember that RPs don't necessarily have to be completed in one go... you can always make a story have split it into several RPs over a short period of time. This ending is fantastic in doing that and gives you a feeling of wanting to see the next one as quickly as possible...] Overall this would have normally been the average RP that most managers are capable of doing. However Thompson has added in several extra pieces to his RP which makes it far more enjoyable to read. He's added a beginning, a middle and his end is yet to come but has made the RP explode with anticipation and excitement for his next one... His presentation is smart and well laid out, his text is readable, his spelling is good and all in all it's a very solid and good RP. Marks out of 100 for this type of RP would be high in the 80's and low in the 90's. Without the added extra's it becomes an average RP that the average manager can produce.
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